Untitled Revolution (Wheels in a Cycle)

[dwim]

I want to write this poem
The one poem that screams
out on the streets
back out in the alleys
invading the radio
& the television sets
& into the mind of
whoever would listen
to the sound
of a train passing by
to the sound
of a low harsh whisper
to the sigh
of a full moon -
& a woman
passing by with integrity
Then laying down
in the cold night,
often unforgiving,
& knew only the words
of someone gone
someone here
someone will be
here & staring
it's a lot to
comprehend &
consider the sight,
sounds, & feelings
the hurt compunded
the love unrequited
the pain of muscles
torn & stretched
in your mind
there's the perfect
vision fading
in & out
out & in
over & out
back to the streets
take the words
out to the streets
where it belongs
& hold on tight
it's a revolution
it's a ride &
it's a dream
you're dreaming
so get over it
& take a stand
pick your fights
& face
your own reality.

[erisesoteric]

Jam. Good. Tight and effective...

[gollum]

damn. i like that a lot. i think that one's getting added to the 'dwim' file. mmmm...good. i'm gonna have to chew on that one for a while.

-g

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Sometimes i think everyone on this board is crazy. The rest of the time i'm sure.
-Dan